Shaft of light
shining through darkness
Swirling winds
driving away dark clouds
Lashing rains
cooling the parched earth
Angel from the sky
driving away despair
blotting out the sun
You vanished never to return
with no hope in the horizon”
“Always with you
I was your shadow
Blinded by sights yonder
you lost sight of here and now”
17 comments:
Hello Latha:)
Lovely word pictures with carefully crafted words to create maximum impact and clarity. Like a skilled painter you have deftly created vivid graphic pictures which opens up the minds eye to amazing scenes you want to portray.
I tried to understand the meaning that lies under the magnificent portraits and come to the conclusion that the grass is greener on the other side and people are always attracted to the other side when every thing they want is with them.
I always feel such people are never satisfied and look back with regret, grief and sorrow. You have not implied this conclusion yet this is what happens to people who are not satisfied with what they have.
Wonderful poem, great pictures and marvelous presentation with deadly impact.
Have a nice day:)
Joseph
Nice thoughts and nicely worded. The weather helped you too? ? ?
Nice :) looks like the weather inspired you a lot :)
very well written yar..rombo nalla irruku...:)
Here is the Angel who comes wearing a 'ring of love'!
Good poem.. not just about sight & sounds.. but there is more to it than what it reveals.
Wonderful words.....
I am very deep believer .......
Interesting post....
@Joseph-Thanks a lot for your sincere words.
Yes, our guardian angel may be right beside us but we tend to realize it rather late. As you say, the grass is greener on the other side. The wisdom to realize otherwise comes late in life for some of us.
Thanks again.
@Janus & Raincrab-Yeah, the weather here is too lovely to be missed :)
Thanks for the patient reading :)
@ Ramesh-Thanks for your time :)
@Subu-Thank you so much
May be you are right,
unspoken words are more
interesting I guess:)
That's left to the reader
to interpret as they please
(makes the job of the writer easier) :)
@Amin-Thank you so much
Sweet of you :)
Here for the first time (from Rama's post). Love what I see... simple, expressive, vivid for all to see and delve deeper, to understand the true essence of it!
@RGB-Welcome :)
Thanks for visiting my blog and
leaving your encouraging comments.
Please do drop in often.
Thanks again
We will see them----Angels
Took me time to read the whole article, the article is great but the comments bring more brainstorm ideas, thanks.
- Johnson
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